Saturday, May 22, 2010

writing updates, 5/23/2010

As you may recall, my writing goals for 2010 went something like this:
  • publish 3 nonfiction travel articles by July
  • publish 3 short fiction stories by July
  • publish my novel by the end of the year
Not counting the paltry piece I did for an information broker ("Tips on Learning to Play the Piano") I've published two nonfiction articles so far (in Real Travel Adventures and In The Know Traveler, respectively). The third (and several more) should be taken care of (and then some) by my trip to England. I've secured a deal with The Expeditioner to publish two-day dispatches covering my two-week sojourn there, beginning mid-June.

My novel goals have been amended, mutating from "publish by the end of the year" to "move the story toward publication." Sound nebulous to you? You're right. I've decided to forget the deadlines. Following them was a lot of stress and a dearth of productivity. I'm not due to get my manuscript back from my beta readers anytime soon, so there's nothing substantial to do for the nonce. But more excitingly, I'm making arrangements to send my MS off to my great uncle (on my mother's side) and my second cousin (on my father's), both of whom are published authors. My great uncle has written something like 40 books on business, and my cousin wrote a dark fantasy romance novel. I've sent both of them letters, asking if they'd care to read what I have and give me any pointers (including information about publishers and agents). I already know that my great uncle is interested; my grandfather (his brother) passed the information along to him, and he asked if he could have a look. And at the moment, the poor man's laid up in his house with a ruptured spleen, so (as Grandpa said) this is the perfect opportunity for me to employ him as a reader!

I'm tremendously excited about this. Professional input is what I really need at this point. Getting help from the pros is going to be a godsend. My relations might even put me in touch with an agent! Huzzah!
That just leaves me with the problem of short fiction. What with blogging, and working a job, and actively seeking another, and languishing with my novel in the ninth circle of revision hell, I haven't had much of a chance at writing anything new. But I've put my shoulder to the wheel, and I now have four stories on the go.

They're all science fiction. The first is ruddy brilliant, or would be, if I could just figure out to get from Act II to the end of Act III. It's about a human colony on another planet that's ruled by the same sort of debilitating caste system they have (or used to have) in India. The second story is rotten, only a few paragraphs in and I'm already hating it. It's about the Big Crunch, and takes place billions of years in the future. It was inspired by certain stories I read in a science fiction anthology, The World Turned Upside Down. Isaac Asimov had a pretty good one in there ("The Last Question") which concerned the distant future, and human evolution, and what would happen to the universe, and so on. Mine is similar. But I think I'm just coming off as a hack.

The third story is even ruddier brillianter than the first. Got a sort of cryptozoological angle to it. Plus it has an old-timey feel that's fun to write (it's set in Rhodesia in 1957). The fourth story, which I just began writing the other night, is about the Bermuda Triangle. Specifically, it concerns Flight 19: a squadron of Grumman TBM Avengers that went on a long-distance training mission in 1945 and vanished without a trace. More mysterious yet, one of the search planes that was sent to look for them disappeared as well. There's all sorts of theories about what happened to these airplanes and their crews, ranging from the mundane to the fantastic. Maybe they ran out of a fuel. Maybe a freak microburst swatted their planes out of the air. Maybe strange fluctuations in Earth's magnetic field played merry hob with their compasses and sent them far off course. Maybe they were abducted by UFOs. Maybe power crystals from the city of Atlantis opened up a pathway to another dimension and sucked them in. Who knows where they wander now...?

Unlike most of my other writing projects, I'm optimistic and cheerful about these stories. I have a feeling that they're going to be no problem, you know? Just some little 10,000-word stories, that's it. Editing them's going to be a snap, I've got the plots all figured out in advance (something I didn't really have when I began writing The Novel). Plus they're just plain fun: I feel as though I can just write whatever comes into my head, take the story whatever direction I want, write the story itself about whatever I want. Look at the above: you've got planetary colonization, universe-destroying, horrific monsters, and the intoxicating and timeless mystery of the Bermuda Triangle (under a veneer of WWII airplanes). What's not to love? Moreover, with these short stories, there's not as much research required as a full-blown novel, not as much writing required as a full-blown novel, not as much revision required as a full-blown novel, not as much depth required as a full-blown novel, not as much—

Noticing a pattern here? Publishing is what's bothering me. I've never tried to market anything fictitious before. My subscription to Writer's Market has slackened, and I'm hesitant to begin another, because now it costs money, dammit, and I'm trying to save for England. I need to suck it up and just pick up a copy at the local bookstore, I guess. But either way, I need to find some short fiction (science fiction) markets. If I do that (and I really work my butt off between the time I get back from England and July 1st, 2010) then I ought to reach my goals.

I'll keep you posted. If anyone has any suggestions about magazines that publish short fiction, I'd be grateful. Heck, I'll sell 'em to Playboy. That's how Stephen King got his start, y'know.

16 comments:

dolorah said...

Jeez Dude, you're wearing me out with all the optimism. :)

I'm on vacation for the next two weeks, and hopefully I'll get a couple short stories polished and out to publishers, and I'm hoping to send out at least 10 queries for Book 1. I want to get some writing done on the fantasy too - but the research on that is intimidating.

I'm thinking I may just write some story, and worry about refining the setting later . . .

Good luck with your goals!! And I agree that working on self directed deadlines can be stress. Oh, and thanks for the links to you published writings.

.......dhole

dolorah said...

I stopped by both the magazines, but didn't see anything with your byline. I know you have a thing about publishing your name here, but can't read your articles without at least the title.

Interesting travel magazines, look like excellent publications. The couple stories I read were well written and interesting. Not your unique voice however :) but interesting. Glad to know you've published in those.

......dhole

Jerry said...

I'm enthused on how you are moving forward. The attitude is positive, the goals are set, and you you march onward.

Ah -- dear Isaac...his three genius laws of robotics....I miss him and Clarke and Heinlein. Have read any of John Scarzi's work?

A.T. Post said...

DH: Oh, goodness. I didn't link to my pages! I did that on purpose. I didn't want to brag. I just wanted to let people take a look at those publications for themselves if they wanted to know what they were like...I guess I'll change 'em if you're curious. I'm really quite flattered...

COOL! Where you going on vacation, if I may ask?? Who are you querying for your book??

Yeah, worry about refining stuff later. Just write. That's the fun bit.

Thanks for the kind words!

Jerry: Thanks a million, sir.

Now, I've read Clarke and Heinlein, but Scarzi...I don't believe I've run across him. Where can I find some of his works?

Shrinky said...

My goodness, so many works in progress, I feel nothing short of a positive sloth next to you! When are you are coming over to Old Blighty, are you staying with friends, or are you just planning on following your feet to where they lead?

Other than Googling Agents, and trawling through their sites for those specialising in your gendre, I'm afraid I can't tip in any better suggestion as to where to direct your work (sorry), but here's hoping your great-uncle might be able to offer some help there (poor lad, hope his spleen is on the mend)!

Claire Dawn said...

Good luck! You're so lucky to have two pubbed writes in the fam. I had to resort to buying an author's time for feedback.lol

dolorah said...

Of course I’m interested. Your blog posts are so well written how can I not want to read a published work.

Those pictures are beautiful; did you take them yourself? And, how much is 20,000 won?

The third pix down, that building looks like a big box fan. Made me dizzy just staring at it, and the step shaped one across the street. Way cool. I wish you would have added a picture of the aquarium though. Bandi and Luni’s instead of Barnes and Noble - impressive. When I was in Europe, my biggest complaint was Pepsi Limonade. I hate Coke, but you couldn’t get a real Pepsi anywhere except on base.

I had dinner in the Space Needle in Seattle. I didn’t feel it move, and only looked out the window long enough to get dizzy. But it was worth the experience. I must say, you certainly know how to experience a city. I liked that you had your own agenda, and went off on your own to explore all the things you wanted to see. What an adventure you had in Seoul!

“That is the generation gap in Korea: either you pray or you take pictures.” Too normal!!

What a contrast the second article was. “Here, more than anywhere else, are the growing pains of an Asian nation revealed.” That message was clear through the entire reading; the struggle between the new and old cultures.

Both articles imparted a clear sense of time and place, of a culture on the verge of change, yet trying so hard to retain its ancestry. I really enjoyed these Postie. Thank you so much for the links. Wow, you taught yourself the Korean alphabet? That is amazing.

As for my own vacation: I’m spending it at home, pretending to be a full time writer. I don’t know who I’m going to send my queries to yet; that’s part of my adventure. To seek out new and exciting prospects, insert relevant personal anecdote, and wow them with my refined query letter.

(crosses fingers) We’ll see if it all works out :)

.......dhole

Roland D. Yeomans said...

As for marketing your novel, you need an agent. And there is a wonderful free resource;
www.agentquery.com

You look up your category of fiction and hit SEARCH. WHAM!

You have pages and pages of agents listed and what they want and how they want it.

Hope this helps, Roland

A.T. Post said...

Shrinky: Hello there! Don't feel like a sloth. After reading that hectic story you just posted, I can see that I was talking through my hat about being too busy to write.

I'll be over from June 11-24. I'm staying with some mates in Newcastle, but I'm taking some time to wander off into Scotland and Ireland, and I'll have almost a full day in London to cut loose. I'm going to try to see the Eye, the Tower, the British Museum, maybe Kensington Palace if there's time.

Thanks for the kind words and wishes! I hear Uncle is feelin' a lot better. Up and around, anyway.

Claire: I'll say! I'll take nepotism if it's available, ha! Sorry you had to pay your way, but hey--at least you got some face time, right?

DH: Awww, I don't know what to say. I'm deeply touched. A thousand thanks, friend.

I took all the pictures except the ones for the Jirisan climb (because I lost my camera and all my pictures; the editor supplied some for that piece). When I went to Korea, 1,000 won was roughly equivalent to one U.S. dollar. Now it's something like 1,300 won to the dollar, so 20,000 would be around, oh, 15 or 16 bucks.

PEPSI LEMONADE?! Ick! I know what you mean. They didn't have a proper hot dog or sausage in sight in Korea. I was dyin'. We found some guy selling spicy bratwurst on the street in Seoul, though, and that was GLORIOUS.

I still want to go to Seattle and the Space Needle. That must be quite something. Yeah, I think I managed to plan the trip out pretty well...have you checked back through my archives? I covered the entire trip on my blog here, too, in a lot more detail than that article. You might enjoy it. It was the sweetest adventure ever...I was livin' the dream!

I'm glad I did what I set out to do with those articles, and that you enjoyed them, and that you took the time to bless me with this feedback. I appreciate it immensely.

And incidentally--the Korean alphabet's pretty simple. It's not like Japanese or Chinese, which are pictographic. Each letter stands for a sound, just like in English. Put 'em together and you get syllables. Pretty simple, and fun to learn--it was like cracking a code.

Good luck on your writing vacation, then! I hope it's productive. Any tips on writing a refined query letter?

Roland: Well hello! Thanks for stopping in and following along! That link is FANTASTIC. First result I pulled up was just what I needed, science/historical fiction. Perfect. That was a boon, my friend. I appreciate it no end.

Roland D. Yeomans said...

Glad you got something you liked out of agentquery. Come visit my blog, will you? And if you like what you see, could you follow it? I'm trying to hit 300 to impress those imaginary agents that I see in my mind visiting my site.

Well, it could happen. And me on a date with Angelina Jolie, too.

Have only happy surprises this new week, Roland

Olivia J. Herrell, writing as O.J. Barré said...

Wow, dude, you're rocking, way to go! Your energy is amazing and I like those story lines you're working on.

Another writer (gosh, who was that?) was talking in her blog the other day about taking time off from her MS to take a flash fiction class and how writing those different shorts had energized her MS. Now here you go running on about it, too. It must truly be so!

I was reading what you said about 10,000 words here and 10,000 words there, that's 20% of a full novel, dude! Just saying. :)

~That Rebel, Olivia

Jane Jones said...

Postman, I have complete confidence that you will fulfill your goals sometime.
You are driven, you are clever, and you are talented. Now all you need is a little bit of luck. (cue song from My Fair Lady: With a Little Bit O' Luck) And of course, hard work.

I have this thing about goals and deadlines. I see how useful they can be, how helpful, but I hate them. I use them anyways, for school and such, but I would rather have things happen as they fall. My goal-orientated father is ready to kill me right now. Let me go argue with him.
I wish we lived in such a way that didn't require such attention to reaching goals. Let's live more, worry less.

Jerry said...

Take a look at my links on my blog...and look for 'Whatever'. That is his blog. He is now president of ....aw hell...the science fiction writers association or whatever. I recommend his book: "The Old Man's War".

Sharon said...

Seriously, Stephen King started with Playboy??? LOL

Good luck Postman, I know you can do it! Also can't wait to hear how the Bermuda Triangle story develops :)

Murr Brewster said...

I'm on your side. I know there are a million markets for short humor out there, but I don't know what they are. I want someone else to find them for me, please. They can take a cut.

It should add up. I made $482 last year and already topped that by $18 this year, and it's only May! Perhaps I should set some deadlines and goals.

Yeah, pretty sure that'll happen.

A.T. Post said...

Roland: I'll do that. Already had a quick look; need to come back later and take a long peruse. Keep holding out for Angelina. You can HAVE her. Ick.

Rebel: Thank you! It means a lot to me to hear that from you. Thanks for commenting. These shorts, if nothing else, have rekindled my love of writing in the first place...gained a little perspective.

Jeez, you gotta read my new post. Some woman I met in the bookstore's first novel was ONE-HUNDRED AND TWENTY-SEVEN THOUSAND WORDS first-draft. Makes 10,000 seem like a drop in the pot.

Jane: Thank you, friend. Your confidence means the world to me.

With a little bit o'luck, with a little bit o'luck, I'll receive a bloomin' grand book deal! That's one of my favorite tunes in "My Fair Lady"...gotta love the Cockney accent put to music.

I know just what you mean. Deadlines are just the bane of the freethinker's existence. It's good that we learn to respect them in school, but man, it's nice to be rid of 'em. And I'm sure your dad, in his own goal-oriented way, is just trying to help you. He wants you to succeed, be productive, attain security and stability. Don't be too hard on him.

"Let's live more, worry less."

I want that on my tombstone. It's the code I try to live by, but I keep forgetting it. Thanks for the reminder.

Jerry: I'll take a look. And I'll keep an eye out for "The Old Man's War." Sounds intriguing already.

Sharon: Yeah, some of the first stories he submitted were to Playboy, I read in his autobiography. Hey, it worked: it got him money and (ahem) exposure.

Thanks for the good-luck wishes, friend. Are you a Bermuda Triangle junkie like me?

Murr: Well, you can't be doing too badly if you made $482 last year! That's about $432 more than I made! Like Jane and I said, though, deadlines are overrated. Thanks for stopping in and commenting. Good luck with the market hunt. If I find any short-humor hubs I'll send 'em your way.